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20篇范文涵盖了初中三年涉及到的所有英语写作的话题,包括学习、健康、网络、生活、环保、礼仪等,会为你的英语写作提供清晰的思路和丰富的素材。
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1How to be a good learner?
【题目】
为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have goodhabits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons beforeclass and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups andhelp each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have someproblems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard isimportant, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful tous.
2My English Study
【题目】
亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求:1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle schoollife will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had somany difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher inclass, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to giveit up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to theteacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as muchas possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interestin studying English can you learn it well.
3Fathers Day
【题目】
父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。
提示:
1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(dosomething that you can do,如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
【优秀满分范文】
Father’s Day is coming and you must bethinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like differentkinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you canbuy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will likeit. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that youcan do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes backfrom work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most importantthing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
4The Spring Festival
【题目】
请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示:
1.春节是中国最重要的节日;
2.人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friendsand relatives;
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It isthe most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend thefestival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinesepeople have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visittheir friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very muchbecause they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5best friend
【题目】
假设Linda是你的好朋友,你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来,你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示,简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示:
1.外貌:以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。
2.爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求:
1.不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;
2.层次清晰,语言流畅;
3.80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed olot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair.However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used tolike playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likesplaying the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to beoutgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by.Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6hometown
【题目】
背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Miachael回一封电子邮件。
提示:过去生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便......现在生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及......
要求:
1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
3.词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)telegram,thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
You want to know sthe changes about myhometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions werevery poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow.Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most familiescouldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People keptin touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter ortelegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown hasdeveloped rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better andmore comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most ofthe people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones.Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
7shopping online
【题目】
随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。
优点
1.  足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广,品种多。
缺点
1.只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。
注意:
1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;
2.80词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
【优秀满分范文】
With the development of the Internet, manypeople are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life.Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Justby a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without goingoutdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded peopleand cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from morevarieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantagesare obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goodsdifferent from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand,shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’sa waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
8My life
【题目】
假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80
【优秀满分范文】
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year.My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning.But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I usedto watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doinghomework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. Butnow I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
9relationship with parents
【题目】
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:
1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
2.你对这些问题的看法;
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship withparents
In my opinion, I have too many rules athome. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’tallow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention tomy exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them.Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too muchpresure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have abright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with myparents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, andalways tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
10Mothers Day
【题目】
今天是母亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:
1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;
2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;
3. 帮助母亲做点事;
4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a specialday, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show ourlove to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her,with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car thisafternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walkwith her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much.I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’mlooking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
11、考试试卷
【题目】
英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。
要求:
1.设想当时的情景,适当扩展细节;
2.书写工整,100词左右。
参考词汇:top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分
【优秀满分范文】
We had an exam yesterday and now the papersare being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student gotfull marks.
Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s,because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong toa girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who aregood at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m notsure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she isa top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belongto Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, itmust belong to her.
12pop songs
【题目】
现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇80词左右的短文。
【优秀满分范文】
Nowadays more and more middle schoolstudents like pop songs.
A few of them like quiet music because theythink quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students likemusicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to expresstheir own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to.They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they candance to the music.
13、回信
【题目】
假如你是郭佳,你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信,说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情,但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗,所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示,用英语写一封回信给她。
提示:
1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物;
2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrappingpaper);
3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。
要求:
1.语意通顺,条理清楚;
2.80词左右。(信的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数)
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customsof giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out whatyour Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interestedin is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrappingpaper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly,don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because thesehave bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
   Guo Jia
14、做客
【题目】
刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客,因此John Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件,告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
I know that you will visit your Chineseteacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feeluncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier.Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as someflowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner.Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that thefood is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanksis also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.
Good luck
Yours,
Bob
15、餐桌礼仪
【题目】
假设上周六晚上,你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述事情发生的经过,并适当加以评论。
要点提示:
1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。
2. 你请他们不要那样做。
3. 他们不听,反而嘲笑你。
4. 你认为:①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。
②年轻人是祖国的未来,应该......
参考词汇:嘲笑laugh at
要求:
1. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
2. 要点齐全,行为连贯,可适当发挥。
【优秀满分范文】
Last Saturday evening, all my family haddinner in a resturant.
We enjoyed ourselves while we were attable. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laughloudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made usangry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behavethemselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, theylaughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.
In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that inpublic. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obeythe rules in public but also make contributions to the society.
16Keep Healthy
【题目】
健康对我们来说非常重要,我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
【优秀满分范文】
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keephealthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?
First, we need to have healthy eatinghabits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eatless meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat abalanced diet.
Then, playing sports every day can alsohelp us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school insteadof taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccerwith our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. Whenwe are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep ushappy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.
17 keep healthy
【题目】
健康一直是人们关注的问题,我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。
1. 保持健康的重要性;
2. 保持健康的方法:多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;早睡早起;勤洗手;
3. 自己的看法(至少一条)。
注意:1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩展。3.字数60-80词;4.文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Boys and girls,
It is very important for us students tokeep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’dbetter eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hourevery day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed earlyand get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In myopinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.
Thank you.
18How to keep healty
【题目】
20年来,各方面的调查表明:青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healty”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
主要内容包括:
1. 体质下降的原因。如:eat toomuch junk food, have too much homework...
2. 合理的健康建议。如:should domore exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enoughsleep...
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students’ physical fitness isdeclining year by year. I think there are some reasons.
Students have too much homework to do, sothey have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food.That’s also bad for their health.
Then, how to keep healthy? Here is someuseful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students shouldeat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eatless junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.
19protect the environment
【题目】
节约资源,保护环境,从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生,我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low carbon life”为题写一篇短文,简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。
提示:
1.步行或骑自行车上学;
2.节约用水;
3.不用塑料袋;
4.节约用电;
5.充分使用纸张。
参考词汇:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap
【优秀满分范文】
My low-carbon life
Now the human living environment isbecoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life isspreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can wehave a low-carbon life?
Firstly, we can go to school on foot or bybike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turnoff the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after usingit. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plasticones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle someof our textbooks.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbonlife to protect the environment.
20How to behave well
【题目】
某学校开展以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语作文,请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。
内容包括:1.守时,不说脏话;2.礼貌待人,热心助人;3.遵守交通规则,不乱扔垃圾;4...
注意:1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩充。
【优秀满分范文】
How to behave well?
As a student in Yibin, we should behavewell.
First, I think it’s very important to doeverything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words.Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’dbetter not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. Andremember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We needgood team work in our life.


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